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As usual, you do a fantastic essay on Wong Kar Wai. If I had a suggestion, it would be to add a table of contents - this is a very long piece with many parts. I needed multiple sessions to finish it, and found it hard to get back to where I last stopped without some added navigation.

I really hope Kar Wai makes another movie. Hadn't realized it was 10 years since his last! Though he did make a bunch of remastered editions in 2021, I believe.

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This is good advice!

I've had trouble with internal linking, which is also why my table of contents page doesn't have its own ToC

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Don't know if it helps but I wrote a guide on how to create TOCs in Substack: https://textualvariations.substack.com/p/toc-in-substack

It seems to generally work if you publish the article first then re-edit.

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This is beautiful and touching. It definitely needs to be a book.

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Thanks, Nadia!

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